A thorny Thursday Short Story
I’d only remove the four elipsis and do an em dash on the parts where the dialogue is cut off. Do you have “Elements of Style”???
Em dashes, right… and have that book somewhere? Also it is for a scene in the future… so I can get it better before then. Thanx…you’re the best.
Hmm. This ⬆️ looks like a cheeky response! 😅
(I can suggest edits on a Word doc if you’re serious about receiving feedback though. DM me if interested)
I’d only remove the four elipsis and do an em dash on the parts where the dialogue is cut off. Do you have “Elements of Style”???
Em dashes, right… and have that book somewhere? Also it is for a scene in the future… so I can get it better before then. Thanx…you’re the best.
Hmm. This ⬆️ looks like a cheeky response! 😅
(I can suggest edits on a Word doc if you’re serious about receiving feedback though. DM me if interested)